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Friday 4 March 2016

One cold shivering day,All the boys got together Ben suggested what to do today he said we should go hiking so Sonny and David were thinking for quite a bit.So Sonny and David said “Why not” so they began to pack there bag they were so humongous we got on our armoured boots and our big puffy Jackets.Because it was so cold and frosty they headed off to the bush track then instantly they got to the bush track.


We were walking like a snail in the bush track there were heaps of Dark,green,icy tip trees in the bush and heaps of hard rocky rocks.We started to walk up to a gigantic steep hill slowly we were getting slower and slower with our big bags it felt like we were caring a pig on our backs we got to the very top of the hill but we still had to walk down on the other side of the
One cold shivering day,All the boys got together Ben suggested what to do today he said we should go hiking so Sonny and David were thinking for quite a bit.So Sonny and David said “Why not” so they began to pack there bag they were so humongous we got on our armoured boots and our big puffy Jackets.Because it was so cold and frosty they headed off to the bush track then instantly they got to the bush track.


We were walking like a snail in the bush track there were heaps of Dark,green,icy tip trees in the bush and heaps of hard rocky rocks.We started to walk up to a gigantic steep hill slowly we were getting slower and slower with our big bags it felt like we were frozen people walking slow we got to the very top of the hill but we still had to walk down on the other side of the hill.But we had to watch our step when we walked down


Eventually we got down from the hill it started get windy trees were waving all around leaves were falling off they started heading but then… A tree comes flying down they try and run but then BOOM! it crashes on Ben’s leg ouch he yells!But luckily, Sonny and David gets out Sonny runs as fast as he could to get help, David said I left my phone in the car” So Sonny drops his bag and runs to the car.

Sonny got to the car and opens it,He grabs the phone out off the glove box and calls 911 the answer he says can I have the ambulance he says where he is.Luckily there was ambulance around the corner he get there like nothing.he takes him to the tree that fell on Ben’s leg they all help pull up the tree it was like you were trying to lift up a truck he wriggles his leg.And then what do you know he was Safe he got out,But his leg was badly bruised and he was limping to the ambulance and he said he’s never going hiking AGAIN!

1 comment:

  1. Awesome narrative Temauri. I really like the different sentence starters you've used at the start of each paragraph.

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