Theme Park Narrative

Doom park

One hot sunny boring afternoon My friend and i David were so hot and bored that we came up with an idea what to do today.He said we should go to Doom park he said it had the highest Roller coaster in New Zealand.So we ran to the car and jumped in then we were finally there i could see the park from ages away suddenly we finally went in the line was so long because it was one of the best parks out by the looks of it.

Then we finally reached the ride we wanted to go on it was called Black invasion it was so high from down where we were but the sun slowly started to go down.And then they turned on the lights for the ride i couldn't wait to get on the ride i said to David.But the line wasn't moving as fast it was moving like a snail so David said to me should we go buy V.I.P passes.So we ran as fast as we could.We bought the V.I.P passes then sprinted back we reached the ride.

We were next said David the roller coaster soon came back we hopped on With Fare in our eyes…We sat down on the chair then the safety bars came down the ride started slowly up the tracks then we got to the very top of the track. And BOOM! we dropped down the tracks were going so fast WOOOOHOOO! putting our hand up then we started to get near those loops.Then the best ride of my life ended then we went back the car and went home.